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Beyond Fiction - Ch2 - Pg17by ~soulman2150

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Okay! End of chapter 2! Finaly!! I hope you enjoyed it.

I would be very happy if you could comment on chapter 2. You can comment on anything art, plot, pace, action.

If you have any questions feel free to ask.

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~PlottingYourDemise Sep 21, 2009 Student Digital Artist

Frankly, I think this is one of the best manga I've read. I love the art, the style, the story (what I understand of it anyway), and everything and anything else i didn't mention. sorry I didn't comment sooner!

Can't wait for chapter 3

~soulman2150 Sep 21, 2009

Wow thanks

Glad to hear that. I'll try not to dissapoint

~PlottingYourDemise Sep 23, 2009 Student Digital Artist

You're welcome

I'm sure you won't, but still, I can't wait

~Spectic Aug 27, 2009

This is really cool, but I just have to say that you need to work on your grammar and speling a bit, because you've made quite a few mistakes through the series. Also, the characters sometimes use pretty stereotypical lines especially this villain guy with the "Haha! You're dead!" and such.

~soulman2150 Aug 29, 2009

I know. The problem with the villian is that he was made up on the spot. Even the design was created only in my mind

He is the typical raider boss who server as a plot device. Nothing special. The 3rd chapter will be a lot better. Allthough I'm really startign to think about deviding the 3rd chapter into 2 seperate chapters. There are just too many pages

!KumoriMusha Jul 15, 2009

Your art is still really good, but I still see a lack of shading and I'm still very confused as to what the story is or if there is one at all.

~soulman2150 Jul 16, 2009

This story isn't very deep so don't expect a Naruto-deep storyline. I don't plan on makning a 200+ chapter manga as I simply don't have time. But still there is a story and I think its obvious what it is. I can point out some key points if you don't understand.

Chapter 1: Focuses on the main character. You find out his name and that he may be the last hope to save the world from ASAP. Now the question is who are these guys who want to bring him to who knows where? Another question is why is he so special? And the last question is what exectly is ASAP, although you can see a picture of it? There are some side questiones on what Lionell's stuff might be

and it still is. Like whats in that backpack hes carrying?

Chapter 2: Reveals who the girl is. It focuses on the relationship the girl has with Lionell. You find out why she knew and how she knew where to find him and that they have a history. The other thing you find out is that Lionell wants revenge and also what is "that" that he could use to finish the battle quickly. You also get some info on powers in the Beyond Fiction Universe (I think I'm gonna make a data-sheet for powers because I don't want to waste pages on explaining this in the manga).

Chapter 3: It will reveal the 3rd characters name but it will mainly focus on Lionell. Its the final showdown afterall

~Zeo-of-the-North Jul 15, 2009 Student

All I have to say is keep up with the story telling and you'll be great! Lookin forward to that last chapter!

~soulman2150 Jul 16, 2009

Thanks

I'll try my best not to dissapoint anyone.

~Lord-J-Degazoru-Sama Jul 15, 2009

nice dude

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